Dec. 24th, 2008
Countdown: BOOM!
Dec. 24th, 2008 08:00 pmI appear to be done. Huh. Where are the fireworks? The confetti?
All right, I still need to tweak the dialogue, proof read multiple times, find a name for the country and generaly tidying up stuff. Fiddling, as I call it. But I'll never be done doing that. I always go back and fiddle with things :)
Final lines:
"Wait," Jenn said. He went to sit up, then thought better of it. "You want me to give these directly to the High Lord of Arthenia, the second most important man in the whole country? They'll probably shoot me for approaching too near the house."
"It shouldn't be a problem," Gwyn said, then the little bastard grinned. "Not for you."
So now how do I find someone to read the previous 84,700 words?
All right, I still need to tweak the dialogue, proof read multiple times, find a name for the country and generaly tidying up stuff. Fiddling, as I call it. But I'll never be done doing that. I always go back and fiddle with things :)
Final lines:
"Wait," Jenn said. He went to sit up, then thought better of it. "You want me to give these directly to the High Lord of Arthenia, the second most important man in the whole country? They'll probably shoot me for approaching too near the house."
"It shouldn't be a problem," Gwyn said, then the little bastard grinned. "Not for you."
So now how do I find someone to read the previous 84,700 words?
- read How To Photograph an Atomic Bomb
- Bed is good. Humidity at night isn't. Must find fan.
- If you really have your friends over to drink and shout a lot and you live in a block of units - can you shut the bloody hell up at midnight
- I'm quite sure last time I looked there were more hours in the day
- I think I shall play carols while wrapping presnets. I have to play them at one time.
- Carol thing might work better if I don't delete the ones I don't like
- And by "carols" I mean sort of Christmas-related songs, with the religious & Santa Claus & winter ones removed (except Little Durmmer Boy )