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I appear to be done. Huh. Where are the fireworks? The confetti?

All right, I still need to tweak the dialogue, proof read multiple times, find a name for the country and generaly tidying up stuff. Fiddling, as I call it. But I'll never be done doing that. I always go back and fiddle with things :)

Final lines:

"Wait," Jenn said. He went to sit up, then thought better of it. "You want me to give these directly to the High Lord of Arthenia, the second most important man in the whole country? They'll probably shoot me for approaching too near the house."

"It shouldn't be a problem," Gwyn said, then the little bastard grinned. "Not for you."


So now how do I find someone to read the previous 84,700 words?

Date: 2008-12-24 09:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cassiphone.livejournal.com
Congratulations, you rock!

*throws fireworks & sets confetti alight*

Date: 2008-12-24 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monissaw.livejournal.com

*picks burnt confetti out of hair*

Thanks :)

Date: 2008-12-24 10:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaelajael.livejournal.com
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Woohoo!
:)

Date: 2008-12-24 10:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaelajael.livejournal.com
Well, that didn't work... :(

Date: 2008-12-24 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monissaw.livejournal.com

It did when I centred it :)
Thanks!

Date: 2008-12-24 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beth-bernobich.livejournal.com
Yay for finished!

*tosses sparkly bon-bons*

Date: 2008-12-24 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monissaw.livejournal.com

Thank you :)

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