Countdown: BOOM!
Dec. 24th, 2008 08:00 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
I appear to be done. Huh. Where are the fireworks? The confetti?
All right, I still need to tweak the dialogue, proof read multiple times, find a name for the country and generaly tidying up stuff. Fiddling, as I call it. But I'll never be done doing that. I always go back and fiddle with things :)
Final lines:
"Wait," Jenn said. He went to sit up, then thought better of it. "You want me to give these directly to the High Lord of Arthenia, the second most important man in the whole country? They'll probably shoot me for approaching too near the house."
"It shouldn't be a problem," Gwyn said, then the little bastard grinned. "Not for you."
So now how do I find someone to read the previous 84,700 words?
All right, I still need to tweak the dialogue, proof read multiple times, find a name for the country and generaly tidying up stuff. Fiddling, as I call it. But I'll never be done doing that. I always go back and fiddle with things :)
Final lines:
"Wait," Jenn said. He went to sit up, then thought better of it. "You want me to give these directly to the High Lord of Arthenia, the second most important man in the whole country? They'll probably shoot me for approaching too near the house."
"It shouldn't be a problem," Gwyn said, then the little bastard grinned. "Not for you."
So now how do I find someone to read the previous 84,700 words?
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Date: 2008-12-24 09:07 am (UTC)*throws fireworks & sets confetti alight*
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Date: 2008-12-24 09:21 am (UTC)*picks burnt confetti out of hair*
Thanks :)
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Date: 2008-12-24 10:20 am (UTC).''. . *''* :_\/_: .
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Woohoo!
:)
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Date: 2008-12-24 10:21 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-12-24 12:27 pm (UTC)It did when I centred it :)
Thanks!
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Date: 2008-12-24 01:52 pm (UTC)*tosses sparkly bon-bons*
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Date: 2008-12-24 02:04 pm (UTC)Thank you :)