That wasn't in the script

[xenith]

So my protags held up the post office on the jump station (it's sort of intermediate space station, you catch a shuttle-thing from the planet to this place, and from there, get a ride to the bigger space station that has gates to all the other jump station). The jump station caters for all travellers & tourists coming & going from the planet, so there's a bit of town there, including a post office that doubles as a bank. Anyway, my protags robbed it, as they were supposed to.

But then the planet-based police guys who are trying to catch them found out where they were and shut down all traffic to the station, trapping the protags there.

THIS WAS NOT SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN.

Now I'm stuck.

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[monissaw.livejournal.com]

They dressed up as women, on the basis that the police guys were looking for young men.

I would have been a more interesting scene if the POV character hadn't come down sick. Eh? That wasn't suppose to happen either.