Declared chapter two done.
Just two people talking Not enough conflict. Blah Blah. Not much looking at things either, except a plate of food.
Mind you, that's just one scene from that chapter. (Let me look.) There's probably enough conflict in the rest of it to compensate.
My thought it, this "second plotline" gives a break from the "main plotline', which might be a bit... depressing. From a reader's point of view, is that desirable or distracting?
Just two people talking Not enough conflict. Blah Blah. Not much looking at things either, except a plate of food.
Mind you, that's just one scene from that chapter. (Let me look.) There's probably enough conflict in the rest of it to compensate.
My thought it, this "second plotline" gives a break from the "main plotline', which might be a bit... depressing. From a reader's point of view, is that desirable or distracting?
