Been working on Chapter 19 for days. Mostly the first scene, because I wasn't happy about the character's motivations. Usually, he just does what he's told, because he's supposed to do and there's no reason to do otherwise. Then suddenly he decides to run away.
So I fixed it. Now he doesn't decide anything. Things just happen so he goes along with them. Bah.
The middle scene was easy. Or maybe it's a bit rushed. Bah.
The last scene just goes on and one forever. Maybe the end has got hooked onto the beginning somehow.
Bah.
All those bahs, needs a sheep.
So I fixed it. Now he doesn't decide anything. Things just happen so he goes along with them. Bah.
The middle scene was easy. Or maybe it's a bit rushed. Bah.
The last scene just goes on and one forever. Maybe the end has got hooked onto the beginning somehow.
Bah.
All those bahs, needs a sheep.
