Date: 2012-12-14 01:09 pm (UTC)
Writerbrain supplies items between the lines - what kind of people were these, how did the rivalry between the coach companies work, what acts of sabotage may have been comitted, who was meddling with contracts, which frivolous lawsuits were planned, what is the story about the woman trying to run away? with a trunk belonging to her husband...

And then, of course, all the action sequences involving the flood, and people stranded and dramatic rescues, and...

(Also, _cut scroes?_ probably needs to be 'cut across' while we're on proofreading.)
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