2 Novels = 2 x plot problems
Nov. 4th, 2009 05:06 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
xenithI have two problems
Problem 1:
How would you try to prove someone is not a ghost?
Problem 2:
"After dark, we should go and visit Jimmy."
I must have looked surprised, because he grinned. "We have to tell Jimmy how we're going to help him escape."
"Jack, we don't know."
He shrugged. "We'll know by then."
I'll have to know too. Um. Help? (He's in chain, in a cell. In them morning he'll be taken on board a ship to the town for trial.) They need a plan tonight that they'll carry out the next day.
Problem 1:
How would you try to prove someone is not a ghost?
Problem 2:
"After dark, we should go and visit Jimmy."
I must have looked surprised, because he grinned. "We have to tell Jimmy how we're going to help him escape."
"Jack, we don't know."
He shrugged. "We'll know by then."
I'll have to know too. Um. Help? (He's in chain, in a cell. In them morning he'll be taken on board a ship to the town for trial.) They need a plan tonight that they'll carry out the next day.
