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Corrie (main character) isn't actually doing anything. She's just goes about her day to day stuff, feeling sorry for herself and reacting to events. Have to keep an eye on this.

Jack comes across as a pathetic loser. Possibly because he keeps telling everyone that he's a pathetic loser, so might not be a problem. Have to keep an eye on this.

Title character isn't playing enough of a role in the early bits.

Kyle is getting more interesting, and his partner is too.

Is killing of the antagonist early on a good idea?

Reading reviews of other novels is very discouraging. They sound so clever and well thought out. *sigh*

I finished two scenes today. Which makes the "agents shoot the mystery rider" the next scene. Again. It's always the next scene.
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