Apr. 18th, 2010

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No idea what I originally got this from, but in the spirit of avoiding the work I should actually be doing, I shall share it


The Ballad of Ben Hall's Gang

Come all ye wild colonials
And listen to my tale;
A story of bushrangers' deeds I will to you unveil.
Tis of those gallant heroes,
Game fighters one and all;
And we'll sit and sing,
Long Live the King,
Dunn,Gilbert, and Ben Hall.

Ben Hall he was a squatter bloke
Who owned a thousand head;
A peaceful man he was until
Arrested by Sir Fred.
His home burned down, his wife cleared out,
His cattle perished all;
"They'll not take me a second time,'
Says valiant Ben Hall.

John Gilbert was a flash cove,
And John O'Meally too;
With Ben and Bourke and Johnny Vane
They all were comrades true.
They rode into Canowindra
And gave a public ball.
'Roll up, roll up, and have a spree,'
Says Gilbert and Ben Hall.

They took possession of the town,
Including the public-houses,
And treated all the cockatoos
And shouted for their spouses.
They danced with all the pretty girls
And held a carnival.
'We don't hurt them who don't hurt us,'
Says Gilbert and Ben Hall.

They made a raid on Bathurst,
The pace was getting hot;
But Johnny Vane surrendered
After Micky Burke was shot,
O'Meally at Goimbla
like a hero fall;
'The game is getting lively,'
Says John Gilbert and Ben Hall.

Then Gilbert took a holiday,
Ben Hall got new recruits;
The Old Man and Dunleavy
Shared in the plunder's fruits.
Dunleavy he surrendered
And they jagged the Old Man tall -
So Johnny Gilbert came again
To help his mate Ben Hall.

John Dunn he was a jockey bloke,
A-riding all the winners,
Until he joined Hall's gang to rob
The publicans and sinners;
And many a time the Royal Mail
Bailed up at John Dunn's call.
A thousand pounds is on their heads -
Dunn, Gilbert, and Ben Hall.

'Next week we'll visit Goulburn
And clean the banks out there;
So if you see the troopers,
Just tell them to beware;
Some day to Sydney city
We mean to pay a call,
And we'll take the whole damn country,'
Says Dunn, Gilbert, and Ben Hall.
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Something else that I have no idea where it original came from, except at some point it's been up on my wall :)

  • Something should happen in a scene. Nothing happening will lose a reader a lot faster than lots of exciting stuff poorly written.

  • When you're ending a scene, it is helpful to give the reader a reason to go to the next scene.

  • Tell the reader what is important, and what our POV thinks about stuff.

  • When a character needs to open the door, you don't have to him getting up, walking seven steps to cross the room, placing his hand on the doorknob, turning it to the right, stepping back to allow the door to swing open and opening the door.

  • There are fives senses -- sound touch, smell and taste as well as sight
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