Feb. 8th, 2007
Progressing, if slowly
Feb. 8th, 2007 11:36 amTaking far too long to rewrite each scene.
I want to get to this interesting stuff! But this shouldn't this be an interesting scene? Our POV and his colleague are sneaking around at night trying to get a good photo of the mystery man while he's robbing the mail coach. Except,our POV is actually sitting down the road a bit while his partner watches things through the camera and it's not so much 'robbing' as the guys in the mail coach quietly handing over anything interesting (it's become part of their job description). Bleargh.
I want to get to this interesting stuff! But this shouldn't this be an interesting scene? Our POV and his colleague are sneaking around at night trying to get a good photo of the mystery man while he's robbing the mail coach. Except,our POV is actually sitting down the road a bit while his partner watches things through the camera and it's not so much 'robbing' as the guys in the mail coach quietly handing over anything interesting (it's become part of their job description). Bleargh.